New Poster

As you can see, I have used the same image, but changed the fog to a serial surroundings of what looks like a house with an eerie light hanging over the opaque ghost who is in a menacing position. It portrays innocence by using the little girl, but that's juxtaposed by her position as she uses direct address, almost like a warning to the audience. The text makes it seem like an old victorian era, so it makes it look like it's been used on a type writer, which creates and old feeling. 

Feedback: 

• "I like it, i like the way the font is wide spreed across the page, but I don't like the style of the font."
• "Not sure on the review up top, you don't really see them like that on a normal poster"
• "She looks to photoshopped, change the lighting and make her blend in with the back ground"
• "I would see that if that was real, make the you repeat bit bigger though because I can't read it"