First Draft of my Trailer

This first draft is basically a template on what I want my trailer to be like, I want to keep few of these clips as some of them capture what I want. I personally feel like this seems rushed, uninteresting and if it came on TV I may change the channel over as it doesn't capture my complete interest. There isn't any sound that captures the atmosphere or anything like that.

Feedback:
"I like it, but it's just 'meh', it's good for a first draft, but I recommend more sound and a text commentary such as: People said it was going to be easy... If you get my drift, but no it's good, but it needs a lot of work on it"

"I like the clips, but the pacing is either too fast or way too slow. Truthfully if this came out as it is now I wouldn't want to watch it"

"It appears interesting, but theres a lot missing such as music that isn't just a voice over... there isn't any texts or effects, if I were you I would see if you can get a recording effect, like a timer or something."

"I like the way the title forms at the end, but it doesn't appears like a trailer, more of a business video or something... yeah I would change that"