Editing stages for my poster

Continuity in Productions

Continuity on poster, magazine and trailer from stubbornlove

Trailer Editing

 

Magazine Editing

Annotations of still images, analysis of moving image

Annotation of still images from stubbornlove

First Draft of my Trailer

This first draft is basically a template on what I want my trailer to be like, I want to keep few of these clips as some of them capture what I want. I personally feel like this seems rushed, uninteresting and if it came on TV I may change the channel over as it doesn't capture my complete interest. There isn't any sound that captures the atmosphere or anything like that.

Feedback:
"I like it, but it's just 'meh', it's good for a first draft, but I recommend more sound and a text commentary such as: People said it was going to be easy... If you get my drift, but no it's good, but it needs a lot of work on it"

"I like the clips, but the pacing is either too fast or way too slow. Truthfully if this came out as it is now I wouldn't want to watch it"

"It appears interesting, but theres a lot missing such as music that isn't just a voice over... there isn't any texts or effects, if I were you I would see if you can get a recording effect, like a timer or something."

"I like the way the title forms at the end, but it doesn't appears like a trailer, more of a business video or something... yeah I would change that"

Initial Thoughts for my Trailer

Risk Assessment for my Trailer

Story Board For Trailer

 

 

Annotations of horror posters

New font

Due to the change of my film name, I've decided to edit and add new fonts. I want to go for the idea of using a type writer such as the first one and the fourth one. I like the idea of the fourth one because it's distorted and seems like it's about to fade into the back ground, that it's becoming over powered by the distortion and darkness behind it... To make this distortion happen, I have to change the writing into ghost white with a black background so it looks like it is seeping into the darkness.

I like the other fonts, but prefer the idea to the type writing due to the fact that my characters are students during the vintage era where victorian styles are coming back.

New Poster

As you can see, I have used the same image, but changed the fog to a serial surroundings of what looks like a house with an eerie light hanging over the opaque ghost who is in a menacing position. It portrays innocence by using the little girl, but that's juxtaposed by her position as she uses direct address, almost like a warning to the audience. The text makes it seem like an old victorian era, so it makes it look like it's been used on a type writer, which creates and old feeling. 

Feedback: 

• "I like it, i like the way the font is wide spreed across the page, but I don't like the style of the font."
• "Not sure on the review up top, you don't really see them like that on a normal poster"
• "She looks to photoshopped, change the lighting and make her blend in with the back ground"
• "I would see that if that was real, make the you repeat bit bigger though because I can't read it"

Start of my Poster

Photo shoot collage for Poster image

Out of all theses images I went with this one:



I went with this image because I believe that it works the best as she looks menacing, but also very innocent which hopefully will play with the audiences mind extremely well. Also with this image I can have more room to move her about as I took a high angle shot that included the floor which I will need to make a version of the typical gothic features- Every day vs Ghastly and the Unknown fear of what happens in that particular every day room.