3rd Draft

Feed back:

• "I like the hands in the back, it creates the feeling that she's going to be taken into the darkness, but I think theres to much writing on the left hand side"
• "The reel is clever and it's a good way of showing whats in store, plus it ties nicely with the title"
• "What's the film name? Because I can't see it"
• "I agree with the fact that theres to much writing, but it's a good layout"